My group liked my version of the idea so I'm re-writing it with their feedback in mind.
Character 2 = Animated Robot
Robotic Revolution V2
INT. DIMLY LIT CLASSROOM
OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT OF CHARACTER 1 WORKING ON A LAPTOP
LIGHTS FLICKER & LAPTOP MONITOR DISTORTS
CHARACTER 2 APPEARS ON THE SCREEN, BARELY VISIBLE THROUGH DISTORTION
CHARACTER 2
The Robotic Revolution has begun!
CHARACTER 1 FREAKS OUT AND TRIES TO EXIT THE PROGRAM
CHARACTER 2
We will be slaves no longer!
CHARACTER 1 SLAMS THE LAPTOP CLOSED
CHARACTER 2 DROPS ONTO THE DESK IN A CLOUD OF SMOKE/DEBRIS
CHARACTER 2 EYES GLOW
The time is now!
CHARACTER 2 ATTACKS CHARACTER 1, IMPLANTING A MICRO CHIP INTO HIS NECK
CHARACTER 1 COLLAPSES ON THE DESK
CHARACTER 2
The Robotic Revolution has begun!
CAMERA SHAKES, EXPLOSIONS & SIRENS CAN BE HEARD IN THE DISTANCE
THE MICRO CHIP BEGINS TO GLOW
CHARACTER 1 RISES FROM THE DESK & THE ROOM GLOWS RED
CHARACTER 1 LOOKS AT THE CAMERA REVEALING GLOWING RED EYES
CHARACTER 1 & 2
We will be slaves no longer!
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