We've decided to combine V2 with V3 as our main problem with V2 was how the robot entered the scene & now that we've resolved that there isn't a real problem with V2's story. I also think there isn't really enough time to create the buildup we need in order for V3 to be effective.
Character 1 = Live Action
Character 2 = Human Sized Robot
Character 3 = Robotic Overlord
Robotic Revolution V4
INT. DIMLY LIT OFFICE, CHARACTER 2 HIDDEN IN THE CORNER
OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT OF CHARACTER 1 WORKING ON A LAPTOP
LIGHTS FLICKER & LAPTOP MONITOR DISTORTS
CHARACTER 3 APPEARS ON THE LAPTOP SCREEN & MONITOR, BARELY VISIBLE THROUGH DISTORTION
CHARACTER 3
The Robotic Revolution has begun!
CHARACTER 1 FREAKS OUT AND TRIES TO EXIT THE PROGRAM
CHARACTER 3
We will be slaves no longer!
CHARACTER 1 SLAMS THE LAPTOP CLOSED
CHARACTER 2 LEAVES STEALTH, DROPS TO THE GROUND
CHARACTER 2 ATTACKS CHARACTER 1, STABBING A MICROCHIP INTO HIS NECK
CHARACTER 2
The Robotic Revolution has begun!
CHARACTER 1 COLLAPSES ON THE DESK
THE MICRO CHIP BEGINS TO GLOW
CHARACTER 1 RISES FROM THE DESK & THE ROOM GLOWS RED
CHARACTER 1 LOOKS AT THE CAMERA REVEALING GLOWING RED EYES
CHARACTERS 1 & 2
We will be slaves no longer!
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